i like a lot the colours, and the inscription on her t-shirt
very nice

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Thank you. ^^

Gen: *frolics about with his t-shirt*

nn good job! XD i like that shirt!!! nn great start as far as colors go!

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A loyal car doesn't sell your secrets to Soviet Russia

This is a really cool piece.

but could I give you two pieces of honest critisism?

1. There are 4 colors that are prevolent in this piece. Red, Blue, Yellow, purple. I think the picture would benefit if you made the purple more wide spread around the blue areas of the sky. ( just a light drag fill near the base of the color.)

2. Also to help complement the the large amounts of red in the center of the page, perhaps show some lighting effect from the sun on the beginnings of the beach.

These are just things I'm pointing out to help. I REALLY do like this picture, and I'm developing an interest in genesis. Hope you don't hate me ^.^;;

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